Talk:The Sound of Running Water

It seems "The Lotus Land of Paradise" was working title, which later became This Very Place the Lotus Paradise.--DhyanAntar 03:23, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

I changed the text a bit. Better?--Sugit (talk) 07:22, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

Yes, but can be not so clear: it is worth to state the title again.--DhyanAntar 17:46, 5 January 2023 (UTC)