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It seems "The Lotus Land of Paradise" was working title, which later became ''[[This Very Place the Lotus Paradise]]''.--DhyanAntar 03:23, 5 January 2023 (UTC) | It seems "The Lotus Land of Paradise" was working title, which later became ''[[This Very Place the Lotus Paradise]]''.--DhyanAntar 03:23, 5 January 2023 (UTC) | ||
I changed the text a bit. Better?--[[User:Sugit|Sugit]] ([[User talk:Sugit|talk]]) 07:22, 5 January 2023 (UTC) | |||
Yes, but can be not so clear: it is worth to state the title again.--DhyanAntar 17:46, 5 January 2023 (UTC) |
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It seems "The Lotus Land of Paradise" was working title, which later became This Very Place the Lotus Paradise.--DhyanAntar 03:23, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
I changed the text a bit. Better?--Sugit (talk) 07:22, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
Yes, but can be not so clear: it is worth to state the title again.--DhyanAntar 17:46, 5 January 2023 (UTC)