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::સ્થળ: ક્રોસમેદાન, મુંબઈ (Place: Cross Maidan, Bombay)
::સ્થળ: ક્રોસમેદાન, મુંબઈ (Place: Cross Maidan, Bombay)
::મહાપુરુષોની આલોચના (Chapter title: Criticism of Great Men)
::મહાપુરુષોની આલોચના (Chapter title: Criticism of Great Men)
:During my research, I found the original Hindi discourse from which it was this booklet is translated. The Hindi discourse has a sentence in last paragraph where Rajneesh says that he is thankful to audience for listening peacefully for ''last three days''. This sentence is missing from Gujarati translation (probably due to irrelevance). It also clarify that the three day discourses (dated 2-5 Dec in timeline) of early 1968 Bombay were held at Cross Maidan. So Cross Maidan should be added in Timeline in my opinion.
:During my research, I found the original Hindi discourse from which this booklet was translated. The Hindi published discourse has a sentence in last paragraph where Rajneesh says that he is thankful to audience for listening peacefully for ''last three days''. This sentence is missing from Gujarati translation (probably due to irrelevance). It also clarify that the three day discourses (dated 2-5 Dec in timeline) of early 1968 Bombay were held at Cross Maidan. So Cross Maidan should be added in Timeline in my opinion.
:Please also check my work and notes in this page are OK. Regards,-[[User:Nizil|Nizil]] ([[User talk:Nizil|talk]]) 06:17, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
:Please also check my work and notes in this page are OK. Regards,-[[User:Nizil|Nizil]] ([[User talk:Nizil|talk]]) 06:17, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

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Notes

This booklet is a Gujarati translation of the transcript of Hindi: Aswikriti Mein Utha Haath ~ 06.

The following details are written in Gujarati on top of Page 1.
આચાર્યશ્રી રજનીશ (Acharyashri Rajneesh)
વિષય : ભારત અને મારી ચિંતા (Subject: India and My Concerns)
સ્થળ: ક્રોસમેદાન, મુંબઈ (Place: Cross Maidan, Bombay)
મહાપુરુષોની આલોચના (Chapter title: Criticism of Great Men)
During my research, I found the original Hindi discourse from which this booklet was translated. The Hindi published discourse has a sentence in last paragraph where Rajneesh says that he is thankful to audience for listening peacefully for last three days. This sentence is missing from Gujarati translation (probably due to irrelevance). It also clarify that the three day discourses (dated 2-5 Dec in timeline) of early 1968 Bombay were held at Cross Maidan. So Cross Maidan should be added in Timeline in my opinion.
Please also check my work and notes in this page are OK. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 06:17, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

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